fulfillment in love

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keithalanhamilton
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fulfillment in love

Post by keithalanhamilton » May 23rd, 2009, 9:49 am

fulfillment in love
inherently driven
based upon need
as well as desire
feeling not whole
something lacking
companionship
lasting devotion
moral support
sexual climax
and reproduction

nonetheless

fulfillment in love
marred by neediness
over-dependency
inflated expectation
fostering discontent
internal resentment
void of forgiveness
anxious to blame
feelings of judgment
dissatisfaction
and unfulfilled love

mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd » May 23rd, 2009, 7:43 pm

toss aside love
and regain the
needed friendship
to restore that
which has been
in neglect for so long

it won't hurt...
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Post by Yejun » May 23rd, 2009, 8:41 pm

What are you trying to do here?

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Post by keithalanhamilton » May 24th, 2009, 5:03 pm

mtmynd

friends are great :D

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Post by mtmynd » May 24th, 2009, 5:13 pm

absolutely!
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Post by hester_prynne » May 25th, 2009, 2:29 am

From full,
to empty,
nonetheless.

Fascinating read.
I dug it
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by keithalanhamilton » May 30th, 2009, 9:04 am

Thnaks :D

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