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Days like today
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 3:07 am
by hester_prynne
Roll a pome out
rev yo spinner up!
Press me press me
chin up buttercup.
All lee all loy,
hannah's in the clover,
throw a ball over a house,
annie annie over!
Grass tickled toes,
hula hula dancers,
laughing buddha guys
don't have all the answers.
Yip Yip skip a rope
up, down, blam,
days like today,
I forget how old I am.
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 5:58 am
by still.trucking
yes it is
a day like today
I remember
waking up
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 6:47 am
by constantine
throw the damn ball over the damn house! you kill me, hester!
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 8:03 am
by saw
we didn't know how good we had it, those days when play was all there was, no bills, no job.....where's the time machine, I want to go back......but there are those days, now, occasionally, when I feel like a boy, and I really savor them.........good work, hester.............
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 9:44 am
by still.trucking
I forgot to thank you hester
You made my day.
It was going to be a bum morning for me till I read your poem.
Posted: May 25th, 2009, 11:12 am
by mtmynd
may your joy remain with you all day and more....
it looks beautiful on you and the song! it spins
and dances with a rhythm straight from your soul
i can hear it even between the words, soft echoes...
ty, hes'... well done ((as usual))
Posted: May 30th, 2009, 7:33 pm
by Yejun
Well done.
Posted: May 31st, 2009, 1:18 pm
by Arcadia
it sounds winkie-festive, hester!!!!!!!
I like it!!!!!
Posted: June 2nd, 2009, 2:41 pm
by SmileGRL
hester...this was like toes in the pool and a rasberry popsicle. delightful. thanks!
Posted: June 4th, 2009, 5:07 pm
by sweetwater
speaks of movement and rhythm
light and humourous
nice metaphoric moments