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.Lucy.
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Unexpected

Post by .Lucy. » June 1st, 2009, 11:48 am

I
I wasn't
expecting
to be loved by you.

Nor was I
aware.
I've been secretly loving you
for more than a year now.

When my unsuspecting heart
landed into your soulful eyes,
I disintegrated.

II
Unexpectedly, you came into my life.

Changed it amidst the chaos and the storm
of my writing, my work, my existence.
I fell into your eyes.
Got lost in the galaxy of You-
your cosmic force too great to deny.

Words and emotions,
new and unbeknownst to me…
I admit:
I have already collapsed
under the sheer force
of your magnificence.

LT
4-09
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Post by hester_prynne » June 1st, 2009, 9:37 pm

Gee, this is about one lucky person!
Love the intense feeling in this.....
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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