expletive heartbreak

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mtmynd
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expletive heartbreak

Post by mtmynd » June 4th, 2009, 10:12 pm

gotta pain up my semi colon
it left me in a comma
i was having quotations

did she question mark
what happened between
the parentheses ?

she took a dash
up her colon that
left her apostrophe
dangling participles
until her next period

my exclamation point
was left italicized
my heart in brackets
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Post by hester_prynne » June 4th, 2009, 11:38 pm

I'll hyphen to that!!!!!
Bravo Cec, as yousyoual!
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Post by sweetwater » June 5th, 2009, 11:04 am

literal and expletive
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Post by .Lucy. » June 8th, 2009, 7:06 pm

Prefix my fragmented sentences and dot my eyes!

GREAT stuff Cec!
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