Courtly Love

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K&D
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Courtly Love

Post by K&D » July 18th, 2009, 8:35 pm

I am not yours anymore
So don’t call me when your bored
Its no longer a mystery nor courtly
So don’t kiss me.

A creature of folklore
I’ve envisioned your likeness more
Often then your lateness.

I’ll be smitten never smitted
I’m on your side be on mine.
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Post by constantine » July 18th, 2009, 10:13 pm

very cool - original. it's whimsical, but emotionally complex. i like it.
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Post by Perdida » July 19th, 2009, 5:14 pm

Nice work KD, love the opening lines especially :D
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Post by .Lucy. » July 20th, 2009, 10:43 am

Heh...You say much in such short lines. I dig it
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