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Chicken, or Egg

Post by Nazz » August 16th, 2009, 5:34 pm

Which came first?
Creation, or creator?
The bang, or implosion?
Rubber band stars
or yo-yo universe?

Stars and deserts, useless things.
Roads to the end of the ice caps.
Who made them? Probably you.

Which came first?
Road, or imagination?
The matter, or space?
Dark matter or light?
Warrior or the fight?

You marvel at your heart beat.
Crow realized God spoke Crow.
But what spoke the rock and ice?
What spoke the silence before?
In dreams he saw places he lived.
Places where he’d never been.

Which came first?
The orbit, or chaos?
Doctrine or the mind?
Magma, or mountain?
Action, or reaction?
Water or the seas?

Crow saw the dark-spined sea.
He saw stars fuming at black God.
He was up there with brimstone.
We got a little brimstone too.

(With a couple of lyrics borrowed from Ted Hughes)

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Post by Nazz » August 17th, 2009, 2:15 am

Okay, so I'm jus' writin' tonight...

"I went back to Ohio"

I went back to Ohio.
Nothing but smoldering farms.
Blues man on a smoldering stoop
pickin’ out a smoldering trance.
He didn’t hit all the notes, but a pulse
full of rock’n roll goodness.

I went back to Ohio,
but my city was gone, bummer.
He was pickin’ the last smoldering summer.
And the notes drift out, hang for a while,
all full of rich, full-bodied smoky flavor.
Nothing like it.

(With a couple of lyrics borrowed from Chrissie Hynde)

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Post by Nazz » August 17th, 2009, 2:19 am

"What's your Number?"

(Cosmic cookie cutter stuff)

Everyone is a number.
Makes sense with a big number.
How else to control a big number?
Everyone got a number and a clicker.

So kill the box!
Try the book machine, here's one,
“Dog helps us fight the war.”
Always some damn war.

Boxing gloves.
Go out, look for a fight.
I wanna punch Mailer in the mouth.
He’s dead, I wanna fight that bastard.

Cell phone go buzz.
Tinkling sound bite snippet.
Screen glows for no reason.
They're tracking me.

Passion never existed.
Lost in a screen, lost in numbers,
big numbers, only makes sense
everyone should be one.

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Post by sooZen » August 17th, 2009, 8:38 am

Yikes! I have a number?
Will I know when it is up?
no fear of snakes or creepy crawly thingees
no fear of lightening bolts or acts of nature
no fear of the unknown or unknowing

but a number makes me tremble and shake
a number has an abstract priority
a number must be a memory
a memory of important stuffing
in the minds' eye of who, what
and the when and where

I'd like to ignore them but no such luck
for numbers plague my every move
and strike when the iron's hot
they seem so innocent but i can assure you
they are not!

numbers are in the groove of every
waking hour and how would you
even know, what that was...unless
those frightful numbers carved themselves
into your internal, infernal clock

so speak of numbers with all care
and do not tread them lightly
for you will never even know
when those numbers chime the end of time
or make you slightly crazy...

Thank you Nazz for the inspiration this fine and dandy morning.
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by Barry » August 17th, 2009, 3:28 pm

The egg came first. Because long before there were chickens, there were dinosaurs. And dinosaurs laid eggs. So the egg came first. This is evolution, and it's not against God. It's got nothing to do with God. It's got everything to do with God.

We are all just little blue eggs, on a little blue egg, inside a little blue egg, in the hand of God.

Life is.
Liberty is.
Happiness is.
Love is ALL there is.
Period.

Peace,
Barry

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Post by Nazz » August 18th, 2009, 2:02 am

Soo, you jammin'..
Barry, chicken, egg
Either works for me!
Number is a number.
Jam is a jam is a jam.

Not sure what Elvis thought of Vegas.
Hummin' a buzzin' summer swelter shelter.
Get the mic, turn it on, late night turn it on.
Air conditioner hums, can't listen to that.
A jam is a jam is a jam, so turn it on.
We got licks already splittin' town.

He was no Memphis Slim.
But that smoky record got to me.
bumped along full and slow, full and slow.
recall that pulse like smoke lightning.
Full of the goodness of rock.
I remember that pulse.

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Post by Nazz » August 18th, 2009, 10:52 pm

well, hey.

"Cynic's campfire"..

On the mountain,
distant bird call sparkle.
Wind washed pines, lusty river.
Look around for cougar and bear.
Predators moved to the suburbs.
I have the pines and volcano.

Shadows get longer.
Fire ebbs in the west.
Trees waving to and fro.
Can't seem to light a fire.

or..

Wind is a joke.
Whips through, and nothing.
The pines were a lusty river.
Mountain's breath, freedom stream.
Quiet now, fire ebbs in the west.
Can't light a fire in a tinderbox.

Pines mutter, sputter, go dark.
Distant bird call, slow concession.
The wind spilled off a mountain,
once vital, volatile and parched.
Can't seem to light a spark.
No spark.

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Post by SmileGRL » August 28th, 2009, 8:26 am

so...why DID the chicken cross the road?

because his cellphone started to ring. it was Elvis calling from inside a little blue egg, sayin his number was up. time to jam. but it didn't matter if the chicken or the egg came first, because the gig was on the other side of the damn road, dude! :mrgreen:

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Post by saw » August 28th, 2009, 10:41 am

only the chicken's hairdresser
knows for sure, knows the roots
that may or may not hide in
blonde ambition...or was she
a rhode island red ?
that's the question.................fine rumblings, mr. nazz..........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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