Breaking Hallmark* Ice
Protective clear sleeve is a window
four textured lines are
bright white canvas
embracing to crop and frame with
paper too thick to cut unlike
the image that slices existence like
the unexpected knife of a soft page
to a fingertip
Riveted red iron dominates
an obnoxious specter growing
from frozen tentacles
formed by waves shocked in artic air
melting like candle wax down
a fire born cylinder as blue
Transparent clouds gestures down
hanging from the sky like wrinkled pants
a bit off center is the space where
reds rage and blues melancholy gather
center of attention is tined purple like a
grape snow cone sucked of
syrup lacking sweetness
Captive in slumber like a childrenÕs tale
waiting not for a prince but for
poison to drain in springs veins is
to drip into new liquid forms
*A conspicuous feature or characteristic.
Breaking Hallmark* Ice
- Jack Daniels
- Posts: 12
- Joined: August 17th, 2004, 4:01 am
- Location: West London, UK.
Hi Jamie,
I wrote the poem months ago, after creating the picture below. It was the first time I intentionally started out focusing on exactly what I wanted to say with my work, and followed through all the way to the end. So, it was very good to hear from you. I really appreciate your commenting.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Cindy
I wrote the poem months ago, after creating the picture below. It was the first time I intentionally started out focusing on exactly what I wanted to say with my work, and followed through all the way to the end. So, it was very good to hear from you. I really appreciate your commenting.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Cindy
great photo!
I like it.
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