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perspective
Posted: August 21st, 2009, 10:59 am
by saw
I was waiting on a corner
Oracle, Arizona
for three hours and nothing
happened
I was so disappointed
in this misnomer of a town
I threw on my backpack
headed in for some desert therapy
into the great american west
home of the spirit dancers
where everything is illusion
and reality is forced to suspend
its grip, where men speak to cacti
mesquite bush, ironwood trees
and I bump into one of them and say,
"Hey, why don't you watch where you're going!"
and one of them replies back to me
"Why don't you go, where you are looking?"
Posted: August 21st, 2009, 12:25 pm
by Barry
Reminds me of something Nazz would write. Nice piece.
Peace,
Barry
Posted: August 21st, 2009, 4:07 pm
by saw
thanx barry...yea, we both like the desert......dessert as well,.... the poetry that comes after a mental journey there.......
Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 2:13 pm
by hester_prynne
I read this several times and will read it several more.
It hits a note in my gut, a melodic chord I can't describe but that I really really dig.
Nice one, good to see you again.
H

Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 5:35 pm
by Nazz
I was disappointed in that place too.
I remember one bumpersticker: "Work hard, annoy a liberal."
Nuff said. Dig it, Steve. I miss that arid light. Always.
Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 7:39 pm
by saw
thanx so much hester for the kind response, I always look forward to your comments....kindred spirit....and of course Nazz, my desert compadre.......thanx a lot for your insight
Posted: August 28th, 2009, 8:44 am
by SmileGRL
yeah, you'd think something white rabbit-ish would happen on a corner in a town called "oracle" within a generous 3 hour period of time, wouldn't you...heh
cool poem, saw. and the last question...that's an important question, i think.
Posted: August 29th, 2009, 12:01 am
by justwalt
reminds me of my first encounter with a roadrunner....
later, it was javelinas...
walt
Posted: August 29th, 2009, 10:39 am
by constantine
oracles are notoriously tricky.
Posted: August 29th, 2009, 1:17 pm
by saw
thanx smile, walt and dino for the fine comments.........
Posted: August 29th, 2009, 5:54 pm
by Perdida
the last few lines fitted in well with the title.
Enjoyed SAW
