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Lahdeedaws, fiddledeedees

Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 3:57 pm
by hester_prynne
Slippin the grip of dander,
my flight gains speed in
droves.
Threats of crash,
looks of horror and disdain.
Old pains, no gains.

Flippin some lip at grandeur,
my choke is easy and my burden
rasps.
Drowns of guilt,
gyp me of regrets.
Impulsive bets, in buried debts.

Spittin some hip with candor,
danger has lost it's mutely
pose.
I look in the mirror.
Don't know who I sees.
Lahdeedaws, fiddledeedees.

Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 5:01 pm
by Nazz
Love it.

Gyp me of regrets.
Bury my debts. Yes!

Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 7:00 pm
by constantine
this is so wild! inspired work.

Posted: August 22nd, 2009, 7:50 pm
by saw
the story of dander, grandeur and candor, the fire-breathing triplets from Barnum & Bailey.......pretty groovy lingo, hester.......that leads somewhere !........enjoyed...it's been a good day for poetry....