forget to remember

[sonofthesun]

shadows talk
if your willing to listen
within these thoughts
forget to remember
eyes play tricks
so learn to decieve them
search for truth
with your dreams to lead you

[Doreen Peri]

that's lovely!

i forgot to remember to reply to this when you originally posted i t;)

"search for truth
with your dreams to lead you"

yes!


(suggest changing "your" to "you're")

[sonofthesun]

yeah i did post this before, was it the same, cant remember, and no there is no apostrophe, thanks for the suggestion though

[Doreen Peri]

IF "If your willing" really means "If you are willing" then it's "YOU'RE" with an apostrophe. Because "you're" means "you are." Otherwise, I don't know what it means.

[sonofthesun]

true i just dont use much of those type of things on here, but i was looking at the last line, didnt even notice the first...i can be quite ignorant on occasions...alcohol doesnt help most times