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forget to remember
Posted: September 1st, 2009, 12:47 am
by sonofthesun
shadows talk
if your willing to listen
within these thoughts
forget to remember
eyes play tricks
so learn to decieve them
search for truth
with your dreams to lead you
Posted: September 12th, 2009, 9:27 pm
by Doreen Peri
that's lovely!
i forgot to remember to reply to this when you originally posted i t;)
"search for truth
with your dreams to lead you"
yes!
(suggest changing "your" to "you're")
yeah, did post it twice, was it the same last time, cant ...
Posted: September 20th, 2009, 11:36 pm
by sonofthesun
yeah i did post this before, was it the same, cant remember, and no there is no apostrophe, thanks for the suggestion though
Posted: September 20th, 2009, 11:56 pm
by Doreen Peri
IF "If your willing" really means "If you are willing" then it's "YOU'RE" with an apostrophe. Because "you're" means "you are." Otherwise, I don't know what it means.
oh yeah
Posted: October 1st, 2009, 10:53 pm
by sonofthesun
true i just dont use much of those type of things on here, but i was looking at the last line, didnt even notice the first...i can be quite ignorant on occasions...alcohol doesnt help most times