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gotta live first

Posted: September 12th, 2009, 9:12 am
by keithalanhamilton
what’s this all for and about
I mean the living thing, anyhow
and too who am I, this me
my body alive having some sense
why, why do I feel so much stuff
overloading my heart with emotion
tell me, when I began to think
as if to be dissatisfied with just being
geez, where will life lead me
down a path filled with meaning
oh how will all my living end
maybe, I gotta live first to know

Posted: September 12th, 2009, 8:41 pm
by hester_prynne
The last line on this rocks it.
Enjoyed
H 8)

Posted: September 13th, 2009, 11:30 am
by keithalanhamilton
Thanks, I truly enjoy your work as well. :)