jam with achilles

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jam with achilles

Post by Doreen Peri » October 3rd, 2009, 1:41 am

i took your funny honest
rubbed expression, believed
it like a hair salon gel, held it
close like a small tricked ghost,
born of the night in a gothic spell,
listened to the fall which is all i got,
the fall of man and woman's lot,
the erotic dream of all things seem,
then turned on to do it
like a twinkie cream,

recorded it on a CD label,
enabled it, fabled it, made it able,
pushed it out like i'm talkin' about,
my baby from the womb of doubt,
legs spread wide, all kidding aside,
lied it next to the insect grub,
but here's the rub, my dear,
come near, i'll whisper in your ear
if ya wanna hear,

there ain't no actuality about the thing,
i took your honest and your heart strung ring,
stuck it in my lyrics and now i'm gonna sing....

............

Aha, aha... i CAN go on!
meet ya at the purple perfect hair salon
you do your nails and i'll sing a song
and we'll make an mp3, achilles,
b'fore too long

let's GO, let's GO! ... i'll see ya there...
gimme yer sex if ya want or dare,
and even if you don't, baby, i don't care
gonna get my hair done in purple and gold
and damn, just wait 'til these lyrics take hold!

i took your funny honest
rubbed expression, believed
it like a hair salon gel and held it
til ya pleased

and then i let it go, oh don'tchya know
back into the midnight of a cyber road!

lalalalalalalaa deeeeeee
thank ya, achilles for singin' with me
dadumdadumdadumdadum da deeeeeee
oh meeeeee oh my... i'm in ecstasy!!!!!

but now it's near midnight and i must leave
so g'night dear friend, have a dream for me!
and i'll see ya on the upside of honesty

when the light has escaped from the sun and moon
would tomorrow be too late or would it be too soon?

baddabat, baddadrumma, baddabee, badda boooooo
oh my god it's been so awesome jammin' wit you!

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Post by the mingo » October 3rd, 2009, 6:55 am

T-H-O-R-O-U-G-H-L-Y C-O-M-P-L-E-T-E-L-Y A-B-S-O-L-U-T-E-L-Y
ENJOYED THIS! YOU'RE SO DAMN SEXY WHEN YOU'RE HAVING FUN !!! Image
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 3rd, 2009, 12:37 pm

hehe :D ... thanks for coming on this amusement park ride with me, mingo! ;)

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Post by the mingo » October 3rd, 2009, 1:48 pm

It's my most selfish pleasure, doreen & thanx for posting this.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by SadLuckDame » October 4th, 2009, 1:07 am

Doreen, I was singing it with ya too.

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 4th, 2009, 11:42 am

It was one wild song, Dame! Thanks for joining in!

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