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Nazz
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The Strip

Post by Nazz » October 4th, 2009, 5:37 pm

The Strip is everywhere.
We won the war, built some highways,
some gas pumps, roadhouses, flashing lights.
We put up neon swoop flourish against deserts.
We put up some rusted Space Age swing,
some billboards on the outskirts of Texas.

The roads all went south
beyond rusted steel plants and jimson weed,
deeper south surrounded by war heroes thick.
Wear the air, breath whispered where it ain’t,
near Vicksburg , the majestic, beaten cannons,
glory and ghosts rising from riverbeds.

They clutch a weapon, a button, a song, a color,
or verse, secrets of universe, blown sand from rock.
Everything fights itself, rain fights its only sun.
God ghosts the holy mountains between.

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Post by Lightning Rod » October 4th, 2009, 7:04 pm

you are the soul's travel agent, nazz
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Nazz » October 4th, 2009, 11:14 pm

Wow, this is a little freaky. But I used 'ghosts' as a verb, which is absurd, so maybe it's ok.

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Post by hester_prynne » October 4th, 2009, 11:29 pm

Whatta ride.
Nazz this is jazz.
Love it
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by SadLuckDame » October 5th, 2009, 12:15 am

Wear the air, breath whispered where it ain’t,
Nice stuff. I like the double usage of ghosts too.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Post by Nazz » October 5th, 2009, 1:32 pm

Thanks Hes, SadLuck. Continuing a pattern of finding a desert in everything... (That can't be healthy!) Or as the band War put it, "The world is a ghetto." Something like that.

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