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to leave it up to the reader

Post by sonofthesun » October 6th, 2009, 1:38 am

who knows
i change stance
how should this be read
with or without
structure
words
interchangable
as stress
meanings often different
on what names do you answer
There is no empty space

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and life shall change

Post by sonofthesun » November 4th, 2009, 1:53 am

you know not what you do...
apart of something been done for years
just go along, better than standing out
find common ground in uselessness
find commonality in worthlessness
who is your daddy, from whence did you come
and you fight
for something you know nothing of
is it love....
no its ignorance
and your full of it
but who am i
i am just me
apart of the whole mess
come together?
no
dont think so
my corporation is built upon your ineptness
live your life in order to make me millions...
There is no empty space

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Post by hester_prynne » November 7th, 2009, 5:44 am

"my corporation is built upon your ineptness"
excellent line.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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