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that it is for a reason

Posted: October 11th, 2009, 12:53 am
by justwalt
perfection mirrors purpose...

but it smells of the divine,
call it... creative-evolution

or the nature of design-
just a point, (mind you), of view,

I like to try to think free...
my best moments are the ones

that separate myself from...me-

well-

only moments, that's how they come,

burning within, then fading out...
my illuminary friends commend,

but their shadows carry doubt-

there is too much to know,

with too many lies to contest...
it places conflict in my way

like some unwelcome guest-

this separation... experience

never ceases to dismay,
like a secret, so expressed,

it may condemn, but not betray-

this freedom is a leap of faith,

as a net cast into the sea....
I catch incindental quiet fate,

which consumes the best of me-

that it is for a reason

is all that I can say,
again, it is this test of faith...

to keep the flesh at bay-

a combining of all the senses

channeled into one alone,
a super-peripheral vision of sort...

that's a moment in the zone-

I don't question it,

don't try to explain it away...
it catches me off guard, sometimes,

like a predator striking its prey-

a taste of perfection,

is so much more than a tease...
it separates my human state,

and puts my soul at ease-


walt
10/09

Posted: October 11th, 2009, 12:53 pm
by hester_prynne
"burning within, then fading out...
my illuminary friends commend,

but their shadows carry doubt-

there is too much to know,"

I especially like these lines,
so hard to put this in words,
however you've done it clearly, and with ease!
Can really really relate.
Enjoyed this read Walt.
H 8)

Posted: October 11th, 2009, 4:28 pm
by Perdida
my best moments are the ones

that separate myself from...me-
loved it all, deep thoughts here but the lines above really stood out for me.

enjoyed muchly.

:D

Posted: October 11th, 2009, 5:02 pm
by justwalt
thankx so much HP... hard to find the words, so true... I guess about 30 hours of finding words that somewhat explain what I feel when these moments manifest. (Divine moments of truth), is all I can call them. A few numbing seconds of "out of body" type clarity...a rarity in my life, but a seemingly increasing event as of late.
It's exciting of course, also sobering, but it leaves behind a very calming effect. Thankx again-

Thankx also to you, Perdida, I sometimes wish I could sustain
this separation... thing, especially since I spend all week working
in NYC and only weekends at home. But I am near many good
friends in both places... Thankx

walt