the emotional journey

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sweetwater
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the emotional journey

Post by sweetwater » October 25th, 2009, 12:49 pm

and in the remembering,
a familiar but vague identification
with the outside world
and an emotional irony
where
the thought of being alive had such an impression
as if to suggest it was more
of an awakening and an opening

and with outstretched arms
as if reaching for an eternity
to reveal and make itself familiar

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Post by Lightning Rod » October 25th, 2009, 5:21 pm

nice, fleeting glimpse
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by justwalt » October 26th, 2009, 12:35 am

way cool,
also sounds like reading the thoughts of a ghost...nice

walt

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Post by sweetwater » October 27th, 2009, 11:35 am

thanks

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