the taste of raspberries

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sweetwater
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the taste of raspberries

Post by sweetwater » October 30th, 2009, 5:43 pm

the imagination of you
singing in the shower
with a feathery raspberry voice

made me smile
and taste raspberries
on the buds of my
summer memories tongue
and feel warm drops like feathers
and waterfall dreams

and it is as if i
heard you singing
seemingly very softly
within your personal note and nostalgia
warm like summer rain

while on the outside
there are leaves
falling
along with the days
getting shorter
as autumn
misses everything
with a tired golden smile

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Post by SadLuckDame » October 31st, 2009, 9:10 pm

Oh! Shoot! It's got a little bit of everything that caught my eye.
Made me smile. Likes it.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Post by panta rhei » November 1st, 2009, 10:59 am

warm like summer rain
raspberries fall like
waterfall dreams

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Post by hester_prynne » November 1st, 2009, 3:00 pm

Indeed, and those last three lines....
those last three lines.....
Superbia!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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