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the taste of raspberries

Posted: October 30th, 2009, 5:43 pm
by sweetwater
the imagination of you
singing in the shower
with a feathery raspberry voice

made me smile
and taste raspberries
on the buds of my
summer memories tongue
and feel warm drops like feathers
and waterfall dreams

and it is as if i
heard you singing
seemingly very softly
within your personal note and nostalgia
warm like summer rain

while on the outside
there are leaves
falling
along with the days
getting shorter
as autumn
misses everything
with a tired golden smile

Posted: October 31st, 2009, 9:10 pm
by SadLuckDame
Oh! Shoot! It's got a little bit of everything that caught my eye.
Made me smile. Likes it.

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 10:59 am
by panta rhei
warm like summer rain
raspberries fall like
waterfall dreams

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 3:00 pm
by hester_prynne
Indeed, and those last three lines....
those last three lines.....
Superbia!
H 8)