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beauty bust the beast!

Post by WIREMAN » November 1st, 2009, 9:11 am

comes a time
ya need no costume
like nevermore
beauty bust the beast

last night
w/contempt
w/solidity
united she stood firm
temptingly perky
deviliciously pouty
like she was on "i spy"
bust that beast!

ain't no why's
@ my age i am wise
to her blame
old enough to walk
away from the game
beast busted
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by Nazz » November 1st, 2009, 3:28 pm

haha. you devil you.. busted.

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Post by WIREMAN » November 3rd, 2009, 12:34 pm

thanks for responding mark....it was a jam on jean-luc godard's movie "contempt" w/brigette bardot as contemptress supreme.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by mnaz » November 3rd, 2009, 9:47 pm

oh yes, excellent, mark. bardot. a must.

also reminded me of my own halloween night at the bar...

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Post by mb » November 4th, 2009, 12:17 pm

never seen the movie,
but that didn't take
anything away from
your clever wordplay
which applies to
so many local and
personal scenarios.

-mb

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Post by WIREMAN » November 4th, 2009, 12:32 pm

.....thanks mb, i do like playin' with the words and all their various interpretations, sounds and feelings.....the bar be the hub of out-life nazz.......
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Post by SadLuckDame » November 5th, 2009, 11:50 pm

This was a trip wired, thanks for the ride.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Post by hester_prynne » November 7th, 2009, 5:41 am

I read your poem and all of a sudden got this hankering to post a song to it.
Inspiring poem!

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Post by saw » November 7th, 2009, 9:15 am

aahh, ms. bardot, she fits the old description, sex kitten, to a tee...
musical as always, brother mark......some women don't need to go to acting class, they just need to be, which is not a knock on her acting,
just a impact statement......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by WIREMAN » November 7th, 2009, 10:53 am

thanks for reading this one steve....she was a great heartbreaker.....in this film contempt she's amazin'under the direction of godard....she busts the beast who's a writer to boot....thanks hest...jim got me with his words at an early age...."come on, come on and touch me baby!"
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by mtmynd » November 7th, 2009, 7:57 pm

when brigitte was in focus
the world somehow stopped
long enough to catch my breath
no matter what she was in
she was always in with me
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Post by Dave The Dov » November 8th, 2009, 6:29 am

Yes I see what you mean then!!!!

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Post by WIREMAN » November 8th, 2009, 5:24 pm

the temptress....this time the contemptress.....thanks dave....thanks cecil...
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Post by goldenmyst » November 8th, 2009, 10:23 pm

Contemptresses proliferate at my age. I am a spectator in the game of love now. Cool poem.

John

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Post by WIREMAN » November 9th, 2009, 12:41 am

.....in a day....in an hour love can turn sour and never be the same....that's life......thanks for reading and responding john....
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