to his majesty

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panta rhei
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to his majesty

Post by panta rhei » November 1st, 2009, 11:03 am

the world is aslant in the ropes today
askew and sloping
and full of yang

and i am a cockeyed queen on her way
roaming the rasta roads of wobble & dream
shaking her rags and feathers

aberrantly straying
in flutter and wow
grinning like a cheshire cat
paving the cow path with pats and
all her bits and pieces
cluttering under the weather

wondering about all the tang
spread throughout the heather and hay
scattered along her off-beat way --

how is your majesty doing today?

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Post by judih » November 1st, 2009, 11:27 am

majesty drips from cloaks and swagger
.........don't leave,
.........don't banish the shine from the mountain top
she glints with her knowing look
never gone, never far away
she drips into earthbound haze

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Post by Nazz » November 1st, 2009, 3:39 pm

great stuff. I'm roaming a few rasta roads myself today..

yeah, what's up, all ye haughty pundits?
what's up, your majesties?

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Post by WIREMAN » November 3rd, 2009, 12:43 pm

i likes the creative rhyme, the flow, the beat glow, so now i gots ta go..........
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by Arcadia » November 3rd, 2009, 5:33 pm

the world: late afternoon rags
candent, busy, languid
and full of ... what?

and I, a proletarian on my way
so concentrated in myself
hey!... is there a majesty today?

( :lol: ) Loved your poem, panta!!! so great to read you!!! :D . My answer only tuesday-humor and a way to say to you a big hola! and at the same time send you a hug!! :wink:

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Post by hester_prynne » November 7th, 2009, 5:46 am

Written from a wonderful space.
Really like this.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by saw » November 7th, 2009, 9:19 am

original, hip and full of new song to sing.....cool stuff.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by mtmynd » November 7th, 2009, 8:00 pm

inspired write, anemone, and great to read.

good to see you again, you black forest queen! ;)
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Post by goldenmyst » November 8th, 2009, 10:28 pm

Nobility enshrined in poetry. I dig your royal lyrics.

John

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