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to his majesty

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 11:03 am
by panta rhei
the world is aslant in the ropes today
askew and sloping
and full of yang

and i am a cockeyed queen on her way
roaming the rasta roads of wobble & dream
shaking her rags and feathers

aberrantly straying
in flutter and wow
grinning like a cheshire cat
paving the cow path with pats and
all her bits and pieces
cluttering under the weather

wondering about all the tang
spread throughout the heather and hay
scattered along her off-beat way --

how is your majesty doing today?

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 11:27 am
by judih
majesty drips from cloaks and swagger
.........don't leave,
.........don't banish the shine from the mountain top
she glints with her knowing look
never gone, never far away
she drips into earthbound haze

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 3:39 pm
by Nazz
great stuff. I'm roaming a few rasta roads myself today..

yeah, what's up, all ye haughty pundits?
what's up, your majesties?

Posted: November 3rd, 2009, 12:43 pm
by WIREMAN
i likes the creative rhyme, the flow, the beat glow, so now i gots ta go..........

Posted: November 3rd, 2009, 5:33 pm
by Arcadia
the world: late afternoon rags
candent, busy, languid
and full of ... what?

and I, a proletarian on my way
so concentrated in myself
hey!... is there a majesty today?

( :lol: ) Loved your poem, panta!!! so great to read you!!! :D . My answer only tuesday-humor and a way to say to you a big hola! and at the same time send you a hug!! :wink:

Posted: November 7th, 2009, 5:46 am
by hester_prynne
Written from a wonderful space.
Really like this.
H 8)

Posted: November 7th, 2009, 9:19 am
by saw
original, hip and full of new song to sing.....cool stuff.

Posted: November 7th, 2009, 8:00 pm
by mtmynd
inspired write, anemone, and great to read.

good to see you again, you black forest queen! ;)

Posted: November 8th, 2009, 10:28 pm
by goldenmyst
Nobility enshrined in poetry. I dig your royal lyrics.

John