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horrorday for strings

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 2:39 pm
by CranePoole
massive triassic modular moleheads
formerly fashion avenue horrorween favorites
now bargainbinned at mallmarts and smallmarts

mudface bloodface noface
eyegouger earripper armclipper
nosecutter neckslicer brainpiercer

they did the mash
we do the hemodance
bloodfeast preferred
zacherle go home

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 3:44 pm
by hester_prynne
Macabre, grim, the last stanza impeccable.
Really like this,
H 8)

Posted: November 1st, 2009, 3:48 pm
by Doreen Peri
Welcome to the Studio!

Grand entrance! ... musical wordplay

chilling theme!

Posted: November 3rd, 2009, 9:35 pm
by CranePoole
thank you for kind feedback!

Posted: November 10th, 2009, 10:48 am
by HaroHalola
Welcome, CranePoole - Glad you jumped-in @ 1st. base; I ain't no monkee, but ahm a b'liever, but my word ain't the gospel like the pre-contenders afore, two of the few what lay It down for me; home-run, baby, bunting optional - H'H./H.e.m.

Posted: November 10th, 2009, 3:32 pm
by Perdida
Chilling indeed, Welcome1 :D

Enjoyed!

Posted: November 12th, 2009, 2:46 pm
by Terri
this proves halloween is every bit as scary as thanksgiving

I like the slam of the rhythm

and hester's right, the last stanza ends it perfectly

cool, ghoul

Posted: November 13th, 2009, 7:50 pm
by Arcadia
it looks like 5´news here lately! :lol: I like how it sounds in my spanish-english the middle estrofa and the title made me smile. Welcome!!! :D