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Swat
Posted: November 7th, 2009, 5:58 am
by hester_prynne
Got a cigarette?
Spare change?
Real change?
Buzz Buzz Buzz.
I want to
swat, swat, swat.
Downtown,
waitin for a bus,
to get me home.
Posted: November 7th, 2009, 9:24 am
by saw
one cannot know what is going on in the world sitting home in front of the tube watching the faux news..........take a walk downtown, stand on the corner waiting for a bus if you want to feel the pulse of the city,
you have condensed the movement of the street into into 9 little lines quite skillfully........enjoyed, hester
Posted: November 7th, 2009, 4:58 pm
by mb
ain't no bus without the buzz
in your town and my town too...
-mb
Posted: November 7th, 2009, 7:46 pm
by mtmynd
a tri-ku..?
Posted: November 10th, 2009, 1:48 am
by K&D
*snaps*
Posted: November 10th, 2009, 3:28 pm
by Perdida
grrr nothing like dem damn fllies that invade your space while waitin for a bus.
Cool write Hester.
Enjoyed
Posted: November 11th, 2009, 9:52 pm
by mnaz
swat-ku.
I know what you mean, hes.
I loathe downtown, I really do.
Posted: November 12th, 2009, 2:36 pm
by Terri
Spare change?
Real change?
Buzz Buzz Buzz.
saw said it: this sounds like the buzz-buzz of newsshow talking heads, as well as the street
nicely distilled
Posted: November 20th, 2009, 3:53 pm
by HaroHalola
h-p - YowWow!
Spare change?
Real change?
Most live-out their lives in structured segments, a few lines at a time, hoping for something better at/before the denouement...
Sometimes ya get "cut" & don't feel It 'til the body/mind is into a limp... Sumthin' I don't often do primarily b/c I do not like It done to me (particularly on another network); however, please, in the spirit of reflection of your literature, TY:
- ? -
A Man in homeless-
khaki approached me, "Do ya'
know the Time," he asked?
H.e.m./H'H.
2.27.MMv.