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Post by goldenmyst » November 11th, 2009, 4:30 pm

Sun Pearl

Plaintive train whistle
Pipes across prairie pastures
Sun pearl rises over knoll
Night cedes to dawn

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Post by Lightning Rod » November 11th, 2009, 6:52 pm

zen
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by goldenmyst » November 11th, 2009, 7:27 pm

Empty mind
Empty belly
Golden road

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Post by mnaz » November 11th, 2009, 9:40 pm

brings back fond memories of camping off pipeline service roads, watching for snakes below as I slide off the truck bed. cool.

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Post by goldenmyst » November 11th, 2009, 9:45 pm

Mnaz, I'm so pleased this brought back good memories for you. I have fond memories of camping as well. Maybe I'll run into you in the back country. :)

John

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Post by mb » November 11th, 2009, 10:57 pm

the sun a pearl
and each day
is your oyster.

-mb

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Post by goldenmyst » November 11th, 2009, 11:20 pm

MB what a lovely thought. And so apropos. :)

John

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Post by judih » November 11th, 2009, 11:47 pm

just when i tire of searching for shooting stars
along comes your pearl
and i'm refreshed

so, thanks john!

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Post by goldenmyst » November 12th, 2009, 11:43 am

Judih, "I seen a shooting star tonight and I thought of you." B.D. Glad you liked my pearl. :)

John

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