Still a fish

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hester_prynne
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Still a fish

Post by hester_prynne » November 22nd, 2009, 2:26 am

Nothing ahead
but corners,
and god dammit
i'm ready.
I got my glide on.
I got my humpswivel
down.
ooph poppa loppa doppa
schwing schwang swish.
I'm still a fish.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by saw » November 22nd, 2009, 11:20 am

cool, no matter what, hester, you can still swish with the best of 'em !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by tinkerjack » November 22nd, 2009, 6:55 pm

I used to be a fish.
Love this poem Hester.
I deleted two replies because I thought I was gushing too much.
And nobody would know what I meant when I wrote
"Hank Williams you wrote my life"
sincerely
still Sequituring
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I used to be smart

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Post by constantine » November 22nd, 2009, 8:48 pm

you're as crazy as i am! god bless ya

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Post by stilltrucking » November 22nd, 2009, 9:13 pm

Sorry hester I cane bacj to delete my reply again.
Poetry is such a trip for me.
I would have to write a thousand words to tell you why the poem tripped my trigger and why I wrote what I did above
thank you for the poem

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Post by mnaz » November 22nd, 2009, 10:01 pm

"humpswivel"... hehehe. you've done it again!

glidin' thru the aqua...

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Post by stilltrucking » November 22nd, 2009, 11:16 pm

still-non sequituring an apology

You cheered me up immensely with that fishy poem. Thank you.

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Post by hester_prynne » November 23rd, 2009, 12:30 am

This was one of those many that sorta write themselves, if you know what I mean, and so I don't feel bad telling you still, that it cheered me up too.
:shock:
Humbled to be read.
Thank youse.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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