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Still a fish
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 2:26 am
by hester_prynne
Nothing ahead
but corners,
and god dammit
i'm ready.
I got my glide on.
I got my humpswivel
down.
ooph poppa loppa doppa
schwing schwang swish.
I'm still a fish.
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 11:20 am
by saw
cool, no matter what, hester, you can still swish with the best of 'em !
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 6:55 pm
by tinkerjack
I used to be a fish.
Love this poem Hester.
I deleted two replies because I thought I was gushing too much.
And nobody would know what I meant when I wrote
"Hank Williams you wrote my life"
sincerely
still Sequituring
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 8:48 pm
by constantine
you're as crazy as i am! god bless ya
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 9:13 pm
by stilltrucking
Sorry hester I cane bacj to delete my reply again.
Poetry is such a trip for me.
I would have to write a thousand words to tell you why the poem tripped my trigger and why I wrote what I did above
thank you for the poem
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 10:01 pm
by mnaz
"humpswivel"... hehehe. you've done it again!
glidin' thru the aqua...
Posted: November 22nd, 2009, 11:16 pm
by stilltrucking
still-non sequituring an apology
You cheered me up immensely with that fishy poem. Thank you.
Posted: November 23rd, 2009, 12:30 am
by hester_prynne
This was one of those many that sorta write themselves, if you know what I mean, and so I don't feel bad telling you still, that it cheered me up too.
Humbled to be read.
Thank youse.
H
