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traveling lightly

Posted: November 28th, 2009, 1:27 am
by saw
memories spin
measured pinwheels
cycle in and out of decades
these days the deja
with the vu-vu-voom

I see the reruns
the actors and actresses
have been cleverly replaced
with aliens intent
on teaching lessons lost

turning a mish mash life
into a fabulous fable, turning
an old man into
a humble student that carries all
his belongings strapped to his back

Posted: November 28th, 2009, 1:31 am
by goldenmyst
Saw, I dig this. How we create yarns about the good old days and lost love. The last line was priceless.

John

Posted: November 28th, 2009, 9:25 am
by Arcadia
I like the sound in it, gracias! :)

Posted: November 29th, 2009, 11:23 am
by saw
thanx so much, john & arcadia......

Posted: November 29th, 2009, 4:03 pm
by hester_prynne
F'in fantastic read, last verse is brilliant, so right on.
H 8)

Posted: December 4th, 2009, 9:48 am
by saw
thanx hester, always a pleasure