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If There Really Is

Posted: December 3rd, 2009, 8:56 pm
by Lightning Rod
Here is a song from an imaginary musical that Barry Gremillion and I are not writing at the moment. Words--Lrod, music--Barry Gremillion.

The scene is the protagonist in bed sleepless with his dog. (the dog's name is Godot)


LISTEN HERE

If There Really Is


I'm an agnostic
dyslexic
insomniac

I stay awake at night
wondering
wondering
if there really is a dog

I wouldn't hog your intellect
I wouldn't ask you questions
I wouldn't tell you what to do
or give you my suggestions

cuz I'ma
an agnostic
dyslexic
insomniac

I stay awake at night
wondering
wondering
if there really is a dog

It's on my blog, just read it
I know you really don't need it
I try not to think of you not thinking of me
the dawn doesn't need for me to greet it

I stay awake at night
I stay awake all night
wondering
wondering
if there really is a dog

Posted: December 5th, 2009, 8:16 am
by silent woman
It's on my blog, just read it
I know you really don't need it
I try not to think of you not thinking of me
the dawn doesn't need for me to greet it
I like that bit a lot.

Sounds good clay.
Thank you

Posted: December 6th, 2009, 2:37 pm
by mnaz
I dig song writing. (the rhyme thing!)

dog is my co pilot.

Posted: December 12th, 2009, 8:55 pm
by stilltrucking
I have no tact
part of my autism I suppose
not sure if this is the wrong thing to ask
but did you stop smoking?
I almost did not recognize your voice on this one
sounds sweet clay.

Posted: May 14th, 2010, 9:49 am
by jimboloco
more than sweet
meek
the earth is yours
you command it from your bunk
you let it go
you don't float away
unlike a bubble you won't burst
like a bubble you will float
every disillusionment is a doorway
into heart of darkness
deep abyss
gravity of mass
fusion music
temperature's rising
fission's breaking out
power of explosion overcomes th black hole
we got some levity an a chemistry set
let's go to town
when there is one
meanwhile we'll snake around watching the show annd flow
ah there's a little cell now
got an egg brain, the yolk's on them
nucleus' pumping information into the walls and tells it
you are a dog, woman will be your friend

Posted: May 14th, 2010, 1:46 pm
by stilltrucking
"Religion is a smile on a dog.
Religion, is a light in the fog"