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solicitation For a title

Posted: December 4th, 2009, 10:02 am
by saw
I tried real hard,
granite determination I'd say
to deny her pop star poetry
made every human effort,
perhaps a few inhuman attempts
as well to dismiss intelligent renderings
c'mon, how could perfect lips
swollen sweet cherries seducing the sun
fragrant dark chocolate beckoning all comers
ever speak any words
of measurable significance, No
one should only be given one or the other,
killer lips....................or something to say

wasn't it enough to be blessed
with ridiculously large matrix eyes
dual hazel drowning pools capable
of mesmerizing any male she gazed upon,
How Dare the universe still allow
this woman to discern humble truth
in a man's soul, provide her
with 24 hr. 'round-the-clock protection
from bimbo-ization, it just wasn't fair
Beauty & Brains
which as all you readers know,
have no known predators, and here I was
all alone in the woods

she had her way with me.

Posted: December 4th, 2009, 10:08 am
by Doreen Peri
Title suggestion (as requested)

"Killer lips, matrix eyes, and a romp in the woods"

(sounds like fun! ;))

Posted: December 10th, 2009, 12:32 am
by saw
not bad doreen.....that title definitely sucks the reader in.....thanx for checking in