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Sunken Forest

Posted: December 17th, 2009, 11:51 pm
by goldenmyst
Sunken Forest

Deep in Bayou Sara’s
Shadowy sunken forest
In thick tussocks
A cricket’s hassock
Where grass harpists
Chirp lonely refrains

Posted: December 18th, 2009, 1:08 am
by judih
a lone cricket
holds the tune
while i hug my pillow

Posted: December 18th, 2009, 4:58 pm
by goldenmyst
Judih, your reply was pure poetry. Basho couldn't have said it better. :)

John

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 10:31 am
by mtmynd
the world happens
everywhere we look
i can hear it now

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 12:35 pm
by saw
the mini shadow world is just as busy as the human one....teeming with life, like christmas shoppers on a new york sidewalk.......another little world goes on in spite of us........

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 12:54 pm
by goldenmyst
mtmynd, so much to hear if only we listen.

Saw, yes there are myriad worlds just out side our door. Those communities live and die in sagas as heroic as the Iliad or Odyssey.

John