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knowing yourself

Posted: December 18th, 2009, 9:53 pm
by saw
Patti liked to be in charge
we had the routine all worked out
we'd smoke a joint have two glasses of merlot
she would turn into Nymphozilla

it was downright scary
even for a young buck marking all the trees
with his rock hard antlers
she was inhuman

and when I was with her
I never felt like it mattered whether
she was with me
or the wino who pissed himself in the alley

Patti had a mission
a calling in life that she did not deny
I was still looking for myself
she already knew who she was

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 1:13 am
by judih
wow. stark. brilliant.
antlers and wino and self-knowledge.
oh, how this works!

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 1:59 am
by Barry
Awesome telling, dude. I remember girls like that. And wondering if I would survive or thrive. And would I be able to tell the difference.

Peace,
Barry

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 3:45 am
by hester_prynne
This is top notch.
Really enjoyed..
H 8)

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 9:38 am
by mtmynd
strong stuff, steve.

ever wonder if she survived her lifestyle..?

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 12:28 pm
by saw
thanx so much judih, barry hester, mtmynd.......and yes, i often wonder what happened to her and other women as well.....

Posted: December 19th, 2009, 1:02 pm
by Arcadia
hey! I used to think I knew a lot of guys like that! :roll: :lol: enjoyed the reading, gracias!

Posted: December 21st, 2009, 11:24 am
by saw
thanx arcadia.....yes, i'm quite sure this is not a gender specific story

Posted: December 21st, 2009, 12:25 pm
by Doreen Peri
What fun! ;)

heh ... I think I knew her. :P

Enjoyed your poem.

Happy Holidays, Steve!

Posted: December 21st, 2009, 12:48 pm
by the mingo
*Sparkle on the Monkey Train*

Righteous Hammer !
Righteous Nails !

Posted: December 21st, 2009, 7:50 pm
by Lightning Rod
nice sketch, saw
sexual philanthropy is forever intriguing

Posted: December 23rd, 2009, 4:37 am
by saw
doreen, mingo, clay...good to hear from you....happy holi-daze !