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Axanderdeath
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the pathetic

Post by Axanderdeath » December 20th, 2009, 8:00 pm

the pathetic

forget it
it was gonna be great
in your its mine
feeled
thought
thinking
over and over
obese
over
under foot
crushed
broken
mis-construction of
reality is harsh
starch
straighten your collar
again and again
the phone never is answered
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by creativesoul » December 28th, 2009, 10:07 pm

Ssounds like a grandmother, wrinkles. Hope you are well . Happy new year!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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