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a whispering

Posted: December 23rd, 2009, 10:46 am
by mtmynd
what is that voice I hear
a whispering
"love... it does not care.."

I turn and look around
I stop... I look... I stare
but all I see is nothing
and yet again i hear
a whispering
"love... it does not care..."

there's a sweet smell of
nectar permeating the air
an invitation to behold
a presence strange and rare

my breathing stops
my eyes they close
my nose takes in the dare
and once again I hear
a whispering
"love... it does not care..."

my mind confused,
hands growing cold
I grasp as best I can
but still I fall into a dream
a dream so kind ... so fair
and there within my dream
I feel love all everywhere

what once was but a whisper
had now became a song
a song that filled the dream
a love would not go wrong

born from the heart of Truth
rising above my fears
a love offering comfort
whispering
"love... it does not care..."

Posted: December 23rd, 2009, 10:58 am
by stilltrucking
absolutely beautiful

tyvm

Posted: December 23rd, 2009, 11:40 am
by Barry
I fully agree with Jack, and I will add amazingly beautiful and full of hope.

Peace,
Barry

Posted: December 23rd, 2009, 8:45 pm
by mtmynd
Thx, truck and thx, Barry. I appreciate the comments, TYVM

I woke this morning with that first line in my head and it wouldn't go away until I wrote it off. ;)