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charade

Posted: January 18th, 2010, 3:57 am
by sonofthesun
your eyes see
shadows of a shadow
a place barely even passable as happening
lost in simplicity you deem complex
in your misunderstanding of your existence
you reign supreme
yet i must thank you
for if all knew
i would cease to be
as i know myself to be
and im not quite ready for that
stay lost for i am not yet found

Posted: January 18th, 2010, 7:16 pm
by constantine
very nice. the feel - the wording and tempo. solid.