Trippin in a mirror

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hester_prynne
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Trippin in a mirror

Post by hester_prynne » April 27th, 2010, 12:54 am

Don't let it
go to your head.
It's just your image.
In glass!
After all.

Okay now focus.
Look at yourself.
Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeep into your eyes.
Some kinda fish in there!
Spillin out.

Hiding.
Ridiculous.
Teeming.
Inner amoeba!
Revealed.

A brief darkness,
and your face returns.
Go ahead, smile.
Feels good!
Trippin in a mirror.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by judih » April 27th, 2010, 8:35 am

this is lifting my spirit! delightful, t!

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Post by mnaz » April 27th, 2010, 5:48 pm

ha. yes.
minnow in a window,
ocean in the motion.
surfin' a reflection.

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Post by saw » April 30th, 2010, 12:52 pm

hester, I shouldn't agree more, we all need to get in touch with our inner amoeba......that's what lacking in modern society and the reason for all the mental illness......a disconnect of monumental proportions.....I have to go now, it's time to stare in the mirror,
find myself.........................................cool poem, btw
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by SmileGRL » May 11th, 2010, 4:16 pm

yeah! and the fish (in there) spilling out, right after that multicolored fish pic of doreen still fresh in my mind, is way cool.

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