the dichotomy called norah

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saw
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the dichotomy called norah

Post by saw » July 4th, 2010, 5:24 pm

she wouldn't let Freud
out of her sight,
wiped her mouth with
the back of her hand
smiled at me
with beastly eyes
barbecue sauce dripping
off her long silk chin

"what do you think Alice
was really thinking,
now That would be the book
the psychoanalyst's notes, yea
The Looking Glass Papers,
yeah, that's it, and you can call me
Daniella Fucking Elsberg,
whoa, I mean, aren't people interesting
c'mon man, fuck your ESP
Nothing........is predictable,
sure sure, I'd love to tell you
my life story, but neither of us
have the time
or the inclination to listen",

she was a beauty alright
that
was never in dispute
crazier than an intoxicated loon
with a new inheritance though
I mean that girl was.......

really pretty
really, really pretty
beautiful
actually
really beautiful
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Post by SadLuckDame » July 5th, 2010, 7:35 pm

This was lovely, like alice, lovely stuff.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Post by saw » July 7th, 2010, 6:59 am

thank so much SLD for the kind words.....some people are harder than others to characterize......some nearly impossible....but we keep at it...
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Post by Lightning Rod » July 7th, 2010, 2:40 pm

I've met her, I know I have
isn't she one of the Gonzales sisters?
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by saw » July 8th, 2010, 7:29 am

could be Clay
she got around
changed her name
to match the city
I'm sure you met her
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