love on the road

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knip
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love on the road

Post by knip » August 28th, 2010, 12:46 am

I let her drive against my nature
might as well be tar, this bus just keeps rolling
day glo etched and on the road
I just need to keep it pointed

Got in the seat, closed eyes without sleeping
I fought my urge to take my place
with wind and history blazing
love will do this to a man

on the road again, sun and sky
and i smile the miles
moving forward, forward
and further along still

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SadLuckDame
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Re: love on the road

Post by SadLuckDame » August 28th, 2010, 12:05 pm

Really nice passion, knip.
Not sure we met, but it's a good piece to smile over.
I look forward to more.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: love on the road

Post by hester_prynne » August 28th, 2010, 12:51 pm

"I fought my urge to take my place"..
I love this line....really good read knip!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Re: love on the road

Post by mnaz » August 28th, 2010, 7:12 pm

where ya been?

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Re: love on the road

Post by knip » August 28th, 2010, 7:53 pm

around and asquare...like the looks here

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Re: love on the road

Post by saw » August 29th, 2010, 11:09 am

yes, "I just need to keep it pointed"......stagnation is doom, roll down the road brothers and sisters, see what you can see.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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