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love on the road

Posted: August 28th, 2010, 12:46 am
by knip
I let her drive against my nature
might as well be tar, this bus just keeps rolling
day glo etched and on the road
I just need to keep it pointed

Got in the seat, closed eyes without sleeping
I fought my urge to take my place
with wind and history blazing
love will do this to a man

on the road again, sun and sky
and i smile the miles
moving forward, forward
and further along still

Re: love on the road

Posted: August 28th, 2010, 12:05 pm
by SadLuckDame
Really nice passion, knip.
Not sure we met, but it's a good piece to smile over.
I look forward to more.

Re: love on the road

Posted: August 28th, 2010, 12:51 pm
by hester_prynne
"I fought my urge to take my place"..
I love this line....really good read knip!
H 8)

Re: love on the road

Posted: August 28th, 2010, 7:12 pm
by mnaz
where ya been?

Re: love on the road

Posted: August 28th, 2010, 7:53 pm
by knip
around and asquare...like the looks here

Re: love on the road

Posted: August 29th, 2010, 11:09 am
by saw
yes, "I just need to keep it pointed"......stagnation is doom, roll down the road brothers and sisters, see what you can see.....