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HAIKU 74 DREAM CATCHER
Posted: September 3rd, 2010, 8:54 pm
by Sue Littleton
dream catcher protects
nightmares stay in its meshes
only sweet dreams pass
Re: HAIKU 74 DREAM CATCHER
Posted: September 4th, 2010, 4:42 pm
by saw
you have illustrated the beauty of haiku....economical poignancy....well done
Re: HAIKU 74 DREAM CATCHER
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:55 am
by Sue Littleton
Appreciate your comment and the analysis of a true (to me!) haiku. I am preparing a bilingual book. Here is the first haiku:
1.
verses come in dreams
pure delicate images
waking me to write
and one of my funniest haiku (because I love humour in my poems):
51.
striped black tail aloft
he pivots on two front feet
loads aims fires pure reek