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HAIKU 73 OLD BARN
Posted: September 3rd, 2010, 8:56 pm
by Sue Littleton
73.
silver sided barn
wood planks warped from season’s storms
beauty wrought by age
granero con paredes plateadas
tablas encorvadas con las tempestades de las estaciones
belleza forjado por los años
Re: HAIKU 73 OLD BARN
Posted: September 4th, 2010, 4:55 pm
by saw
finally a haiku about he beauty of aging...superior.....it qualifies me....ha
Re: HAIKU 73 OLD BARN
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:32 am
by mindbum
yup. a fine one.
i dont know spanish. but that second line is great to say.
Re: HAIKU 73 OLD BARN
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:37 am
by Sue Littleton
Thank you, saw and mindbum. Yep, ageing should be beautiful. I oughta know!
The translation came out rather well -- I am writing a book of Sueku and translating each poem and the Spanish was tacked on by accident in the posting.
Re: HAIKU 73 OLD BARN
Posted: October 24th, 2010, 8:52 pm
by happytrails
Sue, I think posting the Spanish with the English is an excellent idea. What better way to begin learning a bit about another language. I begin to see the correlation of words. I can recognize which words are which. If that makes any sense. I love all of your sueku.