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SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 5th, 2010, 6:33 pm
by Sue Littleton
fiddler scrapes his bow
there’s a cricket by the hearth
small musician plays
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 5th, 2010, 6:38 pm
by .Lucy.
Hmm
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:23 am
by mindbum
crickets bought last night
chewed thru bag & jumped off
chirp under furniture
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:39 am
by Sue Littleton
One cricket is a joy, 100 crickets will drive you mad. ♥♥♥
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:40 am
by mindbum
there were sixty.
abt forty got away.
it ws at my friend's house. which makes it funnier. i havent heard any complaints today.
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 12:47 am
by Sue Littleton
You will hear complaints when all those crickets start eating paper, wool and plants. Plus singing.
Am I correct in guessing those crickets were intended for some cricket-eating pet? ♥
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 11:15 am
by mindbum
usually i dont let many loose at once here at home. i have cats. they'll hunt em. alas, jeff hasnt any cats. he'll have to hunt hisself. or they'll just get away.
i have green tree frogs & firebellied toads. tho i have a suspicion one of my treefrogs is perhaps not the same species as the other. it's quite a lot larger.
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 11:22 am
by Sue Littleton
As we say down here, "Cada loco con su tema," or "Each madman has his theme." Ho ho! ♥
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 11:27 am
by saw
Jiminy could play
umbrella like a fiddle
Pinocchio cringed
cool one !
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 6th, 2010, 2:22 pm
by Sue Littleton
You come over as pretty cool your own self, Dude! ♥♥♥ You and Jimminy and the kid with the funny nose.
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 7th, 2010, 2:05 pm
by joel
crickets, frogs and toads
much volume from small volume
thunder from the air
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 7th, 2010, 4:17 pm
by Sue Littleton
Dear Joel,
And hath thee never heard the singing of the toad in spring?
garden at twilight
sweet notes of toad song thrill
rival linnet and larkSue
Re: SUEKU 76- a classic haiku of 5-7-5- syllables, 3 lines
Posted: September 7th, 2010, 4:19 pm
by Sue Littleton
Dear Joel,
And hath thee never heard the singing of the toad in spring?
garden at twilight
sweet notes of toad song thrill
rival linnet and lark
Sue