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Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: September 24th, 2010, 12:46 am
by emel.scott
Watching the downpour I pen a sad lament,
then the sun paints a rainbow
& I'm embarrassed.
'09
Re: Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: September 24th, 2010, 1:17 pm
by Steve Plonk
emel.scott, outstanding short poem...
Thanks for the nod!
Re: Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: September 25th, 2010, 1:26 am
by emel.scott
Thanks,
Actually if it happened today I'd prolly just fall asleep. Seems that sleep is mightier than the pen these days (and I don't know where the hell the sword went). I think I may have Lyme disease or maybe Epstein Barr or iron poor blood or I've been bitten by a tse tse fly or exchanged bodies with an old man (oops I am an old man).
Re: Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: September 25th, 2010, 11:07 am
by hester_prynne
Woke me up! Delightfully!
H
Re: Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: September 29th, 2010, 1:14 pm
by joel
emel.scott wrote:
I think I may have Lyme disease
I missed this one over the weekend...but it's powerfully concise. That's not my skill. I am still getting over my summer of Lyme Dis. ... funny, in the throws of it, all I could do was write...no energy for anything else.
Hope you feel better!
Re: Mixed media (3 line poem w/ nod to Plonk)
Posted: October 5th, 2010, 7:52 pm
by theirishsea
Good poem---3 lines can pack an emotional punch----some embarrassment but some happiness too---the little things in life can go a long way to make the day enjoyable----3 line poems like this definitely do.