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we'd
Posted: October 6th, 2010, 1:59 pm
by joel
We’d always been the best indeed—
we’d always had the laughs we’d need;
we’d always dug
each other’s drug—
again, indeed, I need that We’d.
Re: we'd
Posted: October 7th, 2010, 9:24 am
by saw
kinda of ogden nashy or shel silversteinish......pretty cool.....
Re: we'd
Posted: October 7th, 2010, 2:22 pm
by mindbum
mmm. fun sounds, sire. bravo.
Re: we'd
Posted: October 12th, 2010, 4:03 pm
by .Lucy.
Indeed, we knew
it was just us two
who'd need to run
when the moment was done.
Re: we'd
Posted: October 12th, 2010, 11:35 pm
by judih
agree, agree
very cool
and lucy's offering too (l)
Re: we'd
Posted: October 27th, 2010, 10:09 pm
by happytrails
Joel. Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: we'd
Posted: October 28th, 2010, 2:45 am
by mnaz
yes, a need for the we'd. how true. good stuff.
Re: we'd
Posted: October 29th, 2010, 11:35 am
by joel
I’m crack ing up—the air’s been still;
I’ll crack the window from the sill
and let the out
be in no doubt
to crack a grin of living will
and smack the face of grace, until
the out comes in
to crack again
my stony heart, then staid and ill,
with healthy thanks to warm my chill.
thanks all for your kind reads. we'd be lost without kindness.
Re: we'd
Posted: October 30th, 2010, 7:10 pm
by happytrails
Joel, the more I read of your stuff, the more I realize that you are much more than just a pretty face.
Re: we'd
Posted: December 17th, 2010, 3:38 am
by dadio
Fine poem.