dear evrything--

Post your poetry, any style.
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mindbum
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dear evrything--

Post by mindbum » October 7th, 2010, 1:56 pm

godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Re: dear evrything--

Post by mnaz » October 8th, 2010, 4:12 am

dear evrything,
I guess that was the deal
coming in...

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Re: dear evrything--

Post by joel » October 8th, 2010, 11:29 am

always good--but also bold in color today...and i like the color -- not more than others, but in a different way, a little stronger taste of everything. thanks as always.
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Re: dear evrything--

Post by saw » October 10th, 2010, 11:16 am

very appealing in function and form.......these typewriter poems are unique and provocative on many levels
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: dear evrything--

Post by Arcadia » October 10th, 2010, 1:31 pm

new serie? I like it!!!!! :D

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Re: dear evrything--

Post by SadLuckDame » October 11th, 2010, 11:13 am

I'm excited to see yours being done in type-write,
such a great way to read your thoughts.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: dear evrything--

Post by mindbum » October 11th, 2010, 1:26 pm

mnaz- you win.

joel- thank ye sire. next one will show some more colors bright. i went with the idea. thanks for reading.

saw- thanks, saw. that's a fine compliment. i think the form makes the epistles happen. small size. think succinctly.

arcadia- yes, something gleefully flinging itself to the page. 'the epistles of amerigo mackeral'. thanks for looking. glad ye enjoy.

sadluckdame- thanks for looking.

i have a passion for typewriters. my tool of choice for many things. art & words & noise.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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