dear doctor --

Post your poetry, any style.
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dear doctor --

Post by mindbum » October 11th, 2010, 2:18 pm

godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Post by .Lucy. » October 12th, 2010, 3:53 pm

THIS ROCKS!! I'm digging this mindbum. Awesome visual companion as well!
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Post by joel » October 14th, 2010, 1:54 pm

yes. color. differently powerful. I like it, so that's one vote -- but not in opposition. I'll vote for the more colorful and the less colorful (it might save me from having to cast all my votes on less appealing words).
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Post by mindbum » October 19th, 2010, 2:11 am

thanks muchly, lucy. i'm enjoying these.

actually gonna do a performance this wknd in bklyn.

jole- thanks for lookin. and spelling better than i. not that i mean that you mean that i mean you mean i that i mean i...

thanks tho, for the viewing. the colors are nice. i'm envisioning a whole composed of the pieces.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Post by judih » October 19th, 2010, 3:14 am

excellent - break a leg in brooklyn!

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