Rainy November Night

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jim turner
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Rainy November Night

Post by jim turner » November 19th, 2010, 3:58 pm

TV’s unusually good tonight.
Noise muted and screen dark,
reflecting live, orange flames
frolicking in my fireplace.

Jim ‘07

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Sue Littleton
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Re: Rainy November Night

Post by Sue Littleton » November 19th, 2010, 6:11 pm

Now THAT is a program I would like to see! My TV is so discreet everyone thinks it's another picture on the wall, and since I never turn it on except to watch movies ... which reminds me, I plan to go through ALL the Henry Potters!

Before I forget, since we are in both Al's and 8, just one comment if there is a repetition, agreed? So you already know your deer haiku is great, but no comment here. Heh heh.

I really truly like this one, Jim. Not only is it a lovely poem, it expresses my feelings about TV exactly. Sue♥

jim turner
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Re: Rainy November Night

Post by jim turner » November 19th, 2010, 6:26 pm

Yep, thank you, we are everywhere, which is a good place to be. But in every place of everywhere we have for the most part difference audiences, which are good things to have. Right?

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