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Pages 7&8
Posted: November 19th, 2010, 9:27 pm
by Artguy
A beacon to boredom
Subdivisions
Blue light windows
Order
Civility
A yellow slash across it all
Screaming speed
No punctuation
Don't want to stop
Can't stop
How many railway ties
To San Miguel
Re: Pages 7&8
Posted: November 19th, 2010, 9:54 pm
by Lightning Rod
this piece disturbs me, kurt
can't tell you why
just reporting how it makes me feel
when I stand in front of it
something about the business against the intensity of the yellow
like neal, too bright to take
Re: Pages 7&8
Posted: November 22nd, 2010, 11:20 am
by Artguy
I'm glad it has that effect...Neal et al were very disturbing in the eyes of the blue light windows of suburban America...