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Five Crows
Posted: November 22nd, 2010, 12:51 pm
by jim turner
Five crows at evening
fight the western wind.
Defeated, they veer,
slide south,
complaining angrily,
This is not where we wanted to go.
Jim 5/31/09
Re: Five Crows
Posted: November 22nd, 2010, 3:54 pm
by Doreen Peri
This is not where we wanted to go.
That's what they sound like, huh? buncha complainers... squawk! They scare me!
I love this poem. Brief, descriptive, a photo of a moment in time. Thanks for sharing it, Jim!
Re: Five Crows
Posted: November 22nd, 2010, 5:07 pm
by happytrails
You always seem to manage to paint a vivid picture in very few words. Love it. And your ability to do it.
Re: Five Crows
Posted: November 26th, 2010, 1:26 pm
by hester_prynne
Brilliant...
H
