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A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 25th, 2010, 4:41 pm
by jim turner
Offended by his verse,
dark in darkness they came;
their thundering gun-butts and boot heels
unhinged the door to his dreams.

Painted flames blazed on the walls
of their scream-proof cell;
tortured fans groaned,
exhausting the stench of agony,
the reek of cigars they did not smoke.

Finely, they twisted pegs to tune his nerves,
then scratched out on those living strings
a shrieking music scored in hell.
For hour-long moments, for day-long hours,
his flesh and bones composed
a final masterpiece on pain--
in sounds that were not words.

Jim 2002

Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 25th, 2010, 5:44 pm
by mnaz
and it was all in the name of some "religious" (in quotes) eventual greater good, no doubt. fools.

Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 25th, 2010, 6:52 pm
by Sue Littleton
It was politics ... he was a poet on the wrong side of the other side. A true poet of the Crystal Lute, Jim! Sue

Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 26th, 2010, 12:08 am
by Doreen Peri
You, Jim, are a wordsmith extraordinaire!

Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 26th, 2010, 12:47 pm
by happytrails
Excellent poem. Horrific topic. But it happens, doesn't it? People being punished for their thoughts?

Re: A POET WHO OFFENDED THEM

Posted: November 26th, 2010, 1:09 pm
by hester_prynne
"Finely, they twisted pegs to tune his nerves"

Gut wrenching deconstruction of soul.
Brutally good
H 8)